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Tuesday, September 27, 2011

The sentence from the word hoard is "demanding so is work" which I have used as the beginning of this writing game.

Demanding, so is work. I guess not all work is equally demanding, but we all feel that our job, what ever it might be, sucks out the best part of our daily lives. That is if we have a job. Many that don’t have jobs whish they could go to work in the morning and many who work wish they didn’t have to. Then of course there are those that wish they didn’t have to go home at the end of the day, but come on. That’s pathetic. Though working is a nuisance and we often feel there is much stuff we would rather be doing, it does feel like we are hard wired to function better with a job to go to every day. Without a job we start to feel useless, our identity is diminishing and the things we take pleasure in when coming home from work seem trivial and stupid when they are not put in contrast to a job. Perhaps I should go find myself a job I can live through so I don’t have to base my self image on my own thoughts and feelings.

1 comment:

  1. This texts needs a bit more direction, building up to a conclusion, or punch-line.
    You missed a great opportunity, given you by your backwards sentence, to make a direct comparison between work and something else. Imagine doing something like this: "Play is demanding, so is work" - to be used in the middle of your text, rather than fired as the very first sentence...

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