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Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Autumn - Revised

Autumn’s coming makes one sad

However, it’s not all bad

Cold rain and Fierce wind

Cleansing one of summer’s sin

Making way for winter, then spring

And the promise of a new summer this will bring

1 comment:

  1. Summer's sin is the most interesting addition, and lifts the whole poem quite a bit.

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