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Tuesday, September 13, 2011

writing 4 - shakespeare rewritten

He was lad and he loves her so. She is more than the sky, the wind, the sun and the earth all in one. Her youth shall not fade and she shall not die, cause as long as folk live and read this text she will live for a long time.
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  1. BentSeptember 19, 2011 at 11:22 PM

    Good - but start off in the present tense and stick with it all the way through! "He is a lad, and he loves her so"

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