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Sunday, September 18, 2011

Writing Game 1

Keeping the Balance

Wondering how your life will turn out

Can be a daunting thing,

Not really knowing how life is lived best

Or what the future may bring.

3 comments:

  1. Good beginning - if you were to continue for an extra five minutes, could you produce an equally good second stanza?

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  2. Hmm, an extra stanza? I'm a little hazy when it comes to the poetry terms :)

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  3. Well, assuming that your first four lines form the first stanza, the second stanza would be also four lines long, using the same rhyme scheme and meter.
    The word 'stanza' comes from Italian and means 'stop'. In Danish we use the word 'vers' or 'strofe'...

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