You are like a warm day in May for there is no such thing more pure and calm. Though the winds may change, time speeds by, and death takes place; my love for you will stay the same. Just as long as I live, my love for you should keep life in my love.
Thursday, September 15, 2011
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lovely, and very moving. Very close in meaning to the original.
ReplyDeleteNicely done - you got all the elements of the original, possibly w. the exception of the idea that it is the READER of the poem that keeps her alive beyond the death of both the lovers...
ReplyDeleteOh... will keep that in mind. haha... thanks!
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