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Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Writing game week 6

To-day I feel completely fine. Yesterday,

I was barely at consciousness. And to-morrow morning,

I have no idea about my health. But to-day,

To-day I feel completely fine. The night sky

And its stars resembles of a free world with no sickness,

And to-day I feel completely fine.


This is the human heart. And this

Is the heart muscle, whose function is vital

When a human wants to live. And this is the heart valve

Which in my case is damaged. The garden

So green and blooming, filled with life and prosperity,

Which in our case is damaged.


This is the respirator, which is always turned on

With a simple motion of the doctor. And please do not turn

It off at any point. You can easily remember this

If you have any education at all. The flowers

are fragile and motionless, never showing their weakness

Off at any point.


And this you can see is the medication. The purpose of this

Is to postpone the situation, as you see. They can regulate it

Rapidly up and down, we call this

Easing the pain. And rapidly up and down

The waves of the sea flows, so vigorously and full of life

They call it easing the pain.


They call it easing the pain: it is perfectly easy.

If you feel any pain in your body: like the legs,

Or the head, or the torso, or the heart,

Which in my case I have not got for long, and the

Flowers still fragile, the sea still restless and the situation going up and down,

For to-day I feel completely fine.

1 comment:

  1. Nice set-up with the war between life and a disease. The two voices come out clearly in imitation of Reed's poem - a good pastiche/rewrite...

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