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Wednesday, September 14, 2011

writing game 3

It is close now it has been creeping around

Playing from above to under the ground.

Soon it will be everywhere and stay

And you will be feeling it every day.

Everything stops and silence will be here

Slowly all the beauty will disappear

Some of it is send to sleep by its poisonous song

And the rest of it have fleet away and is long gone

Its heart is cold and its color is gray

and it will first fade away to the end of may

Every feeling that is good you lack

Oh summer I would shout everyday just to have you back

1 comment:

  1. Is the 'it' snow?

    A couple of mistakes: "sent to sleep" & "fled away" This whole line is unclear: "and it will first fade away to the end of may"

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