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Wednesday, September 7, 2011

a moment in the quad

whats a baby bird?
its a kitten - a kitten in the rain
the golden snitch came running
no seeker to be found
a moment that has passed
the golden man is gone

3 comments:

  1. Nice poem!

    "the golden snitch came running
    no seeker to be found"

    ... makes me think of Harry Potter xP

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  2. Somewhat cryptic little poem - and I mean that as quite high praise. Maybe Martina is on to something with the Potter inspiration - do you want to confirm, or do you prefer to remain silent? The lovely autumn image enhances the mood of the poem in just the right way as a good illustration should.

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  3. I can confirm the Potter ref but its meant more as a metaphor for something thats normally sought and found, but here the seeker is missing so its never caught

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