This blog is for participants in the Fall 2011 class in Creative Writing in the English programme at Aalborg University...
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Tuesday, September 13, 2011
Kisses
When kissing someone You get a special feeling When kissing someone It can help the healing When kissing someone You can fall in love if you’re not careful When kissing someone It can mess with your head When kissing someone It can lead to your death.
Good thing it usually doesn't come to quite that (death) - but you are on to something here! Try to revise the poem avoiding the most worn-out of the phrases you originally came up with...
Good thing it usually doesn't come to quite that (death) - but you are on to something here! Try to revise the poem avoiding the most worn-out of the phrases you originally came up with...
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