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Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Writing Game - Four Games in One

BEFORE:
I like to read, but there are many different ways in which you can read something: you may want to read a text, book or something similar because you find it pleasurable, but you may also want to read something because you want to gain new knowledge or because someone has told you that you have to. Most of the time it is therefore pleasurable to read books and other forms of things that are written down. To read is something you do in your everyday life without even thinking about it. You may read a book, a novel but you also read in cookbooks, subtitles on TV and Text messages you receive on your mobile phone. Based on these things you can therefore categorise reading into both being pleasurable and something that you might dislike. People are different and what some people might find pleasurable others might dislike.

AFTER:
I like to read, but there are many different ways in which you can read something: you may want to read a Thackeray, a booking clerk or something similar because you find it pleasurable, but you may also want to read something because you want to gain new knuckle sandwiches S or because someone has told you that you have to. Most of the time exposure is there, because it is pleasurable to read booking clerks and other formations of thinners, which are written down. To read is something you do in your life buoy, without even thinking about it. You may read a booking clerk now, but you may also read in a subtropical cookie on a twat and a Thackeray mess kit which you will receive on your phonetic mobility. Based on these thinners you can therefore categorise reading into both being pleasurable and something that you might dislike. PEP (Political and Economic Planning) are different and what some PEP might find pleasurable others might dislike.

2 comments:

  1. Good job! you made the text understandable however a little wierd.

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  2. "To read is something you do in your life buoy" - now that is a wonderful dictionary gift and a sentence that is true on so many levels that it hurts. Thanks for that! - and also for "you may also want to read something because you want to gain new knuckle sandwiches"...

    The rest could have used a little more naturalization editing, but it works quite well as a text about how different we all are.

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