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Tuesday, September 6, 2011
Stillness and...
Gazing over the icy fields
Frosty and empty like the widow's heart
Breaking through the omnious clouds
Jacob sends down his ladder
Lighting up a new start
Good work - nice Biblical allusion, and use of simile ("like the widow's heart") and metaphor ("lighting up a new start"). It even rhymes, so certainly a poem!
Good work - nice Biblical allusion, and use of simile ("like the widow's heart") and metaphor ("lighting up a new start"). It even rhymes, so certainly a poem!
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