This blog is for participants in the Fall 2011 class in Creative Writing in the English programme at Aalborg University...
Abstract surroundings Distant sounds stretching Memories whirling past When did beauty leave?
Vividness is long lost Dullness prevails here Yearning for injection Of divine intervention
Nicely put, missy :)
Was the original phrase "intervention divine", then? Unusual...That said, I like your world creating ability in the first stanza - very effective. In the second stanza, though, I think "injection" is weak and could be improved upon!
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Nicely put, missy :)
ReplyDeleteWas the original phrase "intervention divine", then? Unusual...
ReplyDeleteThat said, I like your world creating ability in the first stanza - very effective. In the second stanza, though, I think "injection" is weak and could be improved upon!