Search This Blog

Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Another day arrives nice and hot
Slightly interesting is it not
Other people seem to change
But in my mind im still the same
School and teachers still seem dull
But hopefully the day will soon be done

1 comment:

  1. Do you know the term "Carpe diem" (Seize the day)? This seems to be a poem about not seizing the day, but wishing it away (sorry about the rhyme there!)...

    The rhyme you started out with is not followed up - wonder why..? "... is it not" is a question, is it not? If yes, it should have a question mark at the end, no?

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.