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Tuesday, January 17, 2012
Naming is Hard
To-May, our daughter, 'naming is hard'. Yes-dear-May,
He says but these words. So your-moron farther,
We must teach the importance of naming. But to-May,
To-day, dad says, 'naming is hard'. Elisabeth
'Listen, what a beautiful name,' I thought, the day we met.
But to-day I say: naming is hard.
This is building our stronghold. And this
Is where her defenses will hold together or fall.
When you're a girl, name matters! And naming her is a big deal,
Which in your mind it clearly is not. The branches,
Old, swayed as I saw you across the yard, destiny
Which in your mind it clearly was not
This is our daughter's future of which you speak
With such a light tone in your voice. And please do not let me
See you make that expression again. You must defend her future
If you want her to survive in school. The blossoms
Are not alive as they were when we met, no more do they let
you make that expression again.
And do not think school is not war. The school yard, for kids,
Is a battlefield devoid of rules. We fail this and
Rapidly her name will become her downfall
Easing defeat. And rapidly her name would become
The only thing I could think. I fought it but lost, her name
My downfall, easing defeat.
Her downfall, easing defeat. We must fight for her future
If we want her to survive in school: It's a war
With no rules, give her no weak points, she is meant to survive
Which in our case we clearly were not; but Elisabeth the
Blossoms were alive in the schoolyard with the sound of your beautiful name
But to-May, my daughter: naming is hard.
Saturday, October 29, 2011
NAMING OF DANCES
To-day we have naming of dances. Yesterday,
we had different songs. And to-morrow morning,
we shall have what to do after writing. But to-day
to-day we have naming of dances. I can hear the music
in my mind, I have almost forgotten pleasant sounds.
To-day we have naming of dances.
This is swing. And this
is waltz, the romantic dance that
you love. And this is foxtrot,
accompanied by your favourite jazz music.
The feeling of freedom is completely forgotten
in this no sense war. Accompanied by your
favourite jazz music.
This is salsa, which is the perfect mixture
between music and dance.
You have to try and when you do,
you will love it. Songs and beautiful memories
crossed my mind like a shooting star.
If you try, you will love it.
And this is flamenco. This dance
communicates passion and energy. This is the most
powerful expression of feelings in dancing: the power
of body. As if you had to fight against something so hard
that you should use your own strength.
The power of body.
This is called the power of body: it is perfectly easy
if you use your strength to express feelings, by means of
dancing, music, writing...But in this case strength
is necessary to fight. Birds dance and fly away while
my mind is imaging to be one of them.
Today we have naming of dances.